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J submitted his application to the MA program in Environmental Design at the University today. :)  For his portfolio he put together a website of his photographic observations of urban issues.

It's awesome, and I'm very proud of him. Check it out:

http://jason.shaav.com

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From:[info]hobbitbabe
Date:January 31st, 2009 - 07:39 am
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That's really awesome, and I already wrote him a fan letter.

Some of the little red buttons in the corners (home-page navigation?) are broken.
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From:[info]delta_november
Date:January 31st, 2009 - 04:01 pm
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Links in the "About" section are 404.

Really, how am I supposed to be a proper Internet stalker if I can't read your husband's CV?
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From:[info]laughingmagpie
Date:January 31st, 2009 - 04:25 pm
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Well done! Yay! Congrats to J!

Since it's part of his portfolio, I also looked carefully for typos, etc. I hope it's helpful:

http://jason.shaav.com/sustainable/s_mass_transit.html
"Chinook" spelled "Cinook"

http://jason.shaav.com/not/not_sustainable.html
I noticed a sentence that was a bit ambiguous:
"Please use the left hand menu or arrow icons to navigate through my not sustainable observations." - I'm sure J's observations are very sustainable :-)

http://jason.shaav.com/not/n_road_infrastructure.html
"Macleod Trail" I think is the correct spelling instead of "MacLeod".
Also: "Japaneese"

http://jason.shaav.com/other/o_manhole_covers.html
"exellent"

In the Overview:
"interst"

The bit map thing is intriguing - once I determined which little circle was changing the colours, I clicked on it (I did this to a couple) and a "Towards Sustainability" window popped up. There are a couple typos in it:
"definate"
"belive"
"regulions"
"stategies"
Also - all the links off this window, that lead to "http://jason.shaav.com/towards/" based pages, are broken.

Some fantastic photos in there along with the earnest and wise ideas! Good luck with the application!

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